OK - followed your advice and as usual it ended up better for it. Here is the 'final' pdf (I generated this with jpeg vs png graphics hoping might look better with google drive, but not really) https://docs.google.com/file/d/0Bx7ZNEXlmR0IM3IyRllwRlNnT2M
The odt file is here https://docs.google.com/file/d/0Bx7ZNEXlmR0IVUs4dGUwbFpkdUk For my part I'll treat this as finished, I'd like to get back to some other things this weekend - not the least of which are getting some 'dog food' notes sorted from putting this together and some time checking the bug tracker. Nothing in my notes looks like a show stopper for 4.0.1 (and I'll grab the latest snap shot today and try to do it all one more time) with the possible exception of exporting to PDF with the tagged option set. The last couple of odt (of this flyer) that I uploaded will crash my installation of AOO each and every time if I try to export with that set, but I can do so with text only documents just fine - so I will take some time in the morning to see if I can find what specific item is the culprit, before I make an entry in bugzilla. Thanks Jürgen Oh, one thing - I don't really understand the comment about the color logo, wondering if I'm really being dense on something as I thought this was the color logo. On Wed, Sep 11, 2013 at 3:12 PM, Drew Jensen <drewjensen.in...@gmail.com>wrote: > 1: 13+ years - will do. > > 2: I guess you mean the Apache OO is a a trademark of... and the feather, > that's what you would remove - right? It's looks better with the final > change I posted last time, IMO but if you still think so I could do that. > > 3 - I like them, but I'm not married to them.. > > 4: Thanks, I was not real sure on the wording I chose - Thought about the > community driven project also.. will make an appropriate change there > > One thing I noticed, if you only look at the pdf via google drive it looks > terrible, it prints up very nicely however and looks good in acrobat reader > (and others), my target here was the printer not a browser. > > Anyway, I really will only get one more chance to show this to folks here > before I need to get it to the printer - will do that on the morrow. > > Thanks, > > //drew > > > > On Tue, Sep 10, 2013 at 9:36 AM, Jürgen Schmidt <jogischm...@gmail.com>wrote: > >> Hi Drew, >> >> some general feedback from my side >> >> 1. Why section >> "Stable, reliable software >> Over 10 years of use at organizations, large and small, around the globe" >> >> I would say over 13 years >> >> 2. Apache feature page 1, right lower corner -> I would remove it there >> and would change the Apache logo in the middle and would use the color >> logo. >> >> 3. icons upper right corner second page -> I would remove them >> >> >> 4. Apache OpenOffice is a community -> how about "Apache OpenOffice is a >> community driven project" >> >> >> Juergen >> >> On 9/9/13 6:23 PM, Drew Jensen wrote: >> > Howdy all, >> > >> > Well, a little more work and some feedback led to this - which I now >> really >> > need feedback from you guys on. >> > >> > A couple of small changes - I noted the discussion on the mailing list >> > regarding the users posting to the dev mailing list, so I updated the >> > paragraph on the back cover to remove the reference to the dev list (I >> have >> > not updated the UnivStudent flyer to reflect this yet, but will) >> > >> > Some small typographic changes on the front cover and rear cover, >> dropped >> > the wire frame from the front page (inside flap), left it on the second >> > page - though I have two votes to dump it from there also. >> > >> > Anyway - the real focus, if I may draw you there, is again the why AOO >> > column. The bullet items are the points that I would like to make, but >> they >> > could I'm sure be made better. >> > >> > The lower section AOO is ODF compliant and AOO is a community I'm not >> > really comfortable with. I lifted some of the text from that 2.0 flyer, >> the >> > sentence with company names and I suppose for instance PeopleSoft no >> longer >> > gets a break out, it's just Oracle now, right.. anyhow you input is >> very. >> > >> > So - I guess I'll just use google still: >> > pdf >> > https://docs.google.com/file/d/0Bx7ZNEXlmR0IU2ZJbHVsQ2pOa3M >> > odt >> > https://docs.google.com/file/d/0Bx7ZNEXlmR0IWERCRVozbFBkYVk >> > >> > Thanks in advance for you time, >> > >> > //drew >> > >> > >> > On Fri, Sep 6, 2013 at 11:58 AM, Drew Jensen < >> drewjensen.in...@gmail.com>wrote: >> > >> >> >> >> On Tue, Sep 3, 2013 at 7:38 PM, Drew Jensen < >> drewjensen.in...@gmail.com>wrote: >> >> >> >>> Juergen >> >> >> >> >> >> I started on an SME (which I suppose is Small /Medium Enterprise) >> piece, >> >> it's not that far along with respect to the Why column - but I did >> make a >> >> change to the graphical content, based on Juergen's comment regarding >> >> icons. So I'll put this up to google also, it's a throw back again to >> 2.0 >> >> branding, with the new color. >> >> >> >> pdf >> >> https://docs.google.com/file/d/0Bx7ZNEXlmR0IWFpNd3dSOTBCN3c >> >> odt >> >> https://docs.google.com/file/d/0Bx7ZNEXlmR0IZklSaHFSTk84Umc >> >> and the updated svg for the wireframe >> >> https://docs.google.com/file/d/0Bx7ZNEXlmR0IMzU0bnotSHFVMzA >> >> >> >> Anyway - SME is too broad for my purpose here and I will work tonight >> to >> >> focus a bit more on: >> >> Clerical staff and part-time elected officials in very small >> >> municipalities, which is the demographic of the room where my friend >> will >> >> be pitching his services.. >> >> >> >> As always - I don't own this stuff, feel free to make it better... >> >> >> >> //drew >> >> >> > >> >> >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- >> To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@openoffice.apache.org >> For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@openoffice.apache.org >> >> >
