Also in the English version “WasWhat id Apache OpenOffice?” Should be “What is Apache OpenOffice?”
Regards, Dave > On Oct 11, 2018, at 4:29 AM, Tal Daniel <tal.re...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Looks good. Mind that you left in the English language version the slogan > "die free ..." on the bottom. > > Suggestion: Consider writing supported OS in 2 lines, rather than breaking > the line after "For". > > בתאריך יום ה׳, 11 באוק׳ 2018, 3:20, מאת Carl Marcum <cmar...@apache.org>: > >> >> >> On 10/09/2018 05:41 AM, Peter Kovacs wrote: >>> Hi all, >>> >>> the german community has updated our flyers. >>> >>> Current Version can be found at [1] >>> >>> If you are french or english native speaker, please have a look. >>> >>> And give some feedback, thanks. >>> >>> >>> All the best >>> >>> Peter >>> >>> [1] >>> https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1kpVknzJfZwuV5TOFvezg1V_TZLoSgYaY >>> >> >> Hi Peter, >> >> I can help with the English version if I can get it in a format I can >> cut/paste paragraphs out of without going across the tri-folds. >> >> A few quick ones... >> >> change: >> WasWhat is Apache OpenOffice? >> to: >> What is Apache OpenOffice? >> >> change: >> Apache OpenOffice is portabel : >> to: >> Apache OpenOffice is portable : >> >> Thanks, >> Carl >> >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- >> To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@openoffice.apache.org >> For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@openoffice.apache.org >> >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@openoffice.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@openoffice.apache.org
