These comments are from a light reading (and reading the commit
diffs) since I commented on this doc once before.
* in the 1st paragraph of the section on Describing the data w/
Python, I'm not sure that there are that many Djano users out there
that wouled be helped by the reference to Django
* in the section describing data w/ Python, you've changed the name
of Update to UpdateFeeds, but I don't see any changes to the actual
parcel code that is in 0.6
* in the Viewing data definitions section, you are still using the
old form of invoking Chandler. All such uses should be fixed
* in the section "The Chandler UI", in the Note: - there is a
missing space between A and Collection
* in the same section (and other uses) the link that Collection goes
to isn't particularly helpful
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