Sebb created PLC4X-145:
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Summary: Confusing text on index page
Key: PLC4X-145
URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/PLC4X-145
Project: Apache PLC4X
Issue Type: Bug
Components: Website
Reporter: Sebb
The page http://plc4x.apache.org has the following text:
Beyond implementing the pure adapters we have already implemented some of the
planned integration modules to popular projects in the Apache IoT world such as:
... lots of logos ...
Hereby greatly reducing the barriers and the learning curve for creating
industrial IoT applications.
This does not make sense -- Hereby should be Thereby -- and the second phrase
is separated from the first. Indeed the second phrase is not a complete
sentence in itself.
Hereby is for declarations such as: "I hereby declare that ..."
Thereby is for consequences.
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The page also says:
"At first we will be concentrating on providing adapters for the most widely
used protocol such as:"
"protocol" should be plural.
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