ssorj commented on a change in pull request #223: Fix errors in the Python
tutorial
URL: https://github.com/apache/qpid-proton/pull/223#discussion_r356876398
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File path: python/docs/tutorial.rst
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@@ -249,17 +248,17 @@ Now let's create a simple client to test this service
out.
:linenos:
As well as sending requests, we need to be able to get back the
-responses. We create a receiver for that (see line 14), but we don't
+responses. We create a receiver for that (see line 15), but we don't
specify an address, we set the dynamic option which tells the broker
-we are connected to to create a temporary address over which we can
+we are connected to a temporary address over which we can
Review comment:
For this particular sentence, the original is correct, though a little
unclear. Simplified, the sense is: the option tells the broker to create an
address.
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