jbyrne-redhat commented on a change in pull request #672: DISPATCH-1555: Update
doc for new console ui
URL: https://github.com/apache/qpid-dispatch/pull/672#discussion_r370086145
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File path:
docs/books/modules/user-guide/monitoring-router-network-web-console.adoc
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@@ -24,22 +24,31 @@ under the License
[id='monitoring-router-network-web-console'-{context}']
= Monitoring the router network using {ConsoleName}
-In the web console, you use the tabs to monitor the router network.
+The web console provides several sections you can use to monitor the router
network.
-[cols="30,70"]
+[cols="25,75"]
|===
-| This tab... | Provides...
+| This section... | Provides...
-| `Overview` | Aggregated information about routers, addresses, links,
connections, and logs.
+| Overview
+a|
+Aggregated information about the router network. This includes the following:
-| `Entities` | Detailed information about each AMQP management entity for each
router in the router network. Some of the attributes have charts that you can
add to the `Charts` tab.
+* Dashboard (shows router network statistics)
+* Routers
+* Addresses
+* Links
+* Connections
+* Logs
-| `Topology` | A graphical view of the router network, including routers,
clients, and brokers. The topology shows how the routers are connected, and how
messages are flowing through the network.
+| Visualizations
+a|
Review comment:
The three minor suggestions that follow are aimed at making all of the
descriptions in this table parallel, that is, eliminate the verbs and articles
that begin some descriptions.
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