jbyrne-redhat commented on a change in pull request #673: DISPATCH-1556: Doc - 
add step to set sasldb permissions
URL: https://github.com/apache/qpid-dispatch/pull/673#discussion_r370091939
 
 

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 File path: 
docs/books/modules/user-guide/enabling-username-password-authentication.adoc
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 @@ -55,6 +55,19 @@ The full user name is the user name you entered plus the 
domain name (`__<user-n
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+. Ensure that the `qdrouterd` process can read the SASL database.
++
+--
+The `qdrouterd` process may run as an unprivileged user. Therefore, you may 
need to adjust the permissions or ownership of the SASL database so that the 
router can read it.
 
 Review comment:
   It might be worth rethinking the two uses of 'may' in this paragraph. 
   
   Specifically, I wasn't sure if the first sentence is intended to imply 
permission (that is, the `qdrouterd` process is _allowed to_ run as an 
unprivileged user), or whether it implies ambiguity (that is, the `qdrouterd` 
process _might_ run as an unprivileged user).
   
   The second sentence is more clear-cut. I would consider rewording to 
"Therefore, you might need to adjust..."

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