Hi, @Alex. I have some basic questions about the tutorial. Do you want me
to post them here, in comments in the tutorial text, or in direct messages
to you?

On Wed, Jan 31, 2018 at 7:02 AM, Andrew Wetmore <cottag...@gmail.com> wrote:

> Oh, this looks very interesting. I look forward to stepping through the
> whole thing.
>
> On Wed, Jan 31, 2018 at 4:47 AM, Alex Harui <aha...@adobe.com.invalid>
> wrote:
>
>> I forgot to mention that the tutorial requires the nightly build.
>>
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>>
>> ________________________________
>> From: Alex Harui
>> Sent: Tuesday, January 30, 2018 10:49:58 PM
>> To: dev@royale.apache.org
>> Subject: Re: Royale in 10 minutes (was Re: Proposed table of contents for
>> Royale help documentation)
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> I've pushed what I will call a first draft of the main portion of a
>> tutorial for using Royale.
>>
>> See:
>> http://apacheroyaleci.westus2.cloudapp.azure.com:8080/job/Ro
>> yaleDocs_Stagin
>> g/lastSuccessfulBuild/artifact/_site/create-an-application/
>> application-tuto
>> rial.html
>> <http://apacheroyaleci.westus2.cloudapp.azure.com:8080/job/RoyaleDocs_Staging/lastSuccessfulBuild/artifact/_site/create-an-application/application-tutorial.html>
>>
>> Feedback welcome.  Looks like it might be more than 10 minutes, but it was
>> an interesting look through what Royale can and can't do.
>>
>> A few things I thought of:
>> -DataGrid in Express should probably default to using percentage column
>> sizes.  Then the apps will be "responsive" by default.
>> -If DataGrid could handle plain Array, it would save a few lines in the
>> tutorial.
>> -Should this example look better out of the box?  Different borders or
>> something like that?
>>
>> Other than responding to feedback on the tutorial, I am going to fill out
>> the application-structure page then move on to ASDoc.  So folks are free
>> to just make changes to the .md files to improve the tutorial.  I think
>> that may close out my week.  If I can make ASDoc work a little better and
>> the tutorial is "ok" (not necessarily great or perfect), it might be a
>> good time to cut another release early next week.
>>
>> Thoughts?
>> -Alex
>>
>>
>> On 1/26/18, 12:32 PM, "Alex Harui" <aha...@adobe.com.INVALID> wrote:
>>
>> >
>> >
>> >On 1/26/18, 11:43 AM, "Andrew Wetmore" <cottag...@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >
>> >>I don't think we need to build out the full ToC up front, rather than
>> >>PAYG
>> >>haha. There are tons of pages that I have not yet listed in the Google
>> >>doc,
>> >>and several decisions we have to make.
>> >>
>> >>For example, we have an Express set of controls and MDL and who knows
>> >>what
>> >>else. I presume we need to explain how these various sets of controls
>> >>relate to each other...
>> >
>> >Yes, and it also occurred to me that we need to discuss targets (SWF
>> >output and/or JS output) and how to manage that.  And keep in mind that
>> >someday there may be a third or fourth output.
>> >
>> >My 2 cents,
>> >-Alex
>> >>
>> >>On Fri, Jan 26, 2018 at 1:09 PM, Alex Harui <aha...@adobe.com.invalid>
>> >>wrote:
>> >>
>> >>> Hi Andrew,
>> >>>
>> >>> Responses in-line.
>> >>>
>> >>> On 1/26/18, 2:48 AM, "Andrew Wetmore" <cottag...@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >>>
>> >>> >Good morning.
>> >>> >
>> >>> >Least thing first: Does the Apache header absolutely need to be in
>> >>>short
>> >>> >lines with hard line breaks so it takes up so much vertical space in
>> >>>the
>> >>> >file? Please look at test-apache-header.md and see whether the
>> header
>> >>> laid
>> >>> >out on fewer lines and trusting to line wrapping works.
>> >>>
>> >>> I don't know for sure.  There is a header scanning tool that we use
>> and
>> >>>I
>> >>> just tried it and it didn't mind your reformatting, so that's good
>> >>>enough
>> >>> for me.
>> >>> >
>> >>> >I am fine with your suggestions about where "Hello, World" should be
>> >>>and
>> >>> >how "Developing an application" might play out. However, this does
>> >>>raise
>> >>> >the question of whether this sort of help-docs structure is going to
>> >>>have
>> >>> >an index or other means to locate concepts like "data binding" if it
>> >>>is
>> >>> >tucked down in a larger set of instructions about applications rather
>> >>>than
>> >>> >being a entry itself.
>> >>>
>> >>> IMO, the 10-minute tutorial won't go into any serious detail about
>> data
>> >>> binding, so "data binding" would have its own section wherever it
>> makes
>> >>> sense and a link to it from the tutorial.
>> >>> >
>> >>> >I think the doc structure is still highly fluid and that we need to
>> >>>either
>> >>> >hold off on the ToC until we are closer to alpha-release of the
>> >>> >documentation, or have a less-bulky ToC document. My rough estimate
>> is
>> >>> >that
>> >>> >we have stubs for less than 10% of the pages we will eventually have.
>> >>>
>> >>> IMO, the toc.json is relatively compact and much easier to change.
>> I'm
>> >>> not sure how to make it any smaller.  I could probably sit down and
>> >>>crank
>> >>> out all of the missing stubs in an evening, but is it worth it?  I
>> like
>> >>> the fact that entries don't show up until we create a page for them.
>> >>>
>> >>> My 2 cents,
>> >>> -Alex
>> >>> >
>> >>> >On Fri, Jan 26, 2018 at 4:40 AM, Alex Harui <aha...@adobe.com.invalid
>> >
>> >>> >wrote:
>> >>> >
>> >>> >> Hi Andrew,
>> >>> >>
>> >>> >> I took a quick peek at the Adobe doc.  I'm not sure "Development
>> >>>Phases"
>> >>> >> should be the first thing under "Create an application", especially
>> >>> >>given
>> >>> >> how the Adobe doc says that some of those sub-topics are not
>> phases.
>> >>> >> Also, I think there is more than one way to develop an application.
>> >>> >>
>> >>> >> My temptation is to leave "Hello, World" as the end of the "Get
>> >>>Started"
>> >>> >> section.  Getting "Hello World" to work will prove that you have
>> >>> >>properly
>> >>> >> installed the SDK.  Then, I would like to suggest tweaking the
>> >>>"Create
>> >>> >>An
>> >>> >> Application" section to be where we build an app in 10 minutes.  I
>> >>>think
>> >>> >> we should start with "Application Structure"  I will discuss the
>> MVC
>> >>> >> pattern there as an option.  Then the next section would be called
>> >>> >> something like "A (10 Minute) Tutorial" and the sub-topics will be
>> >>>major
>> >>> >> steps towards building an example app.  It will take you through
>> >>> >>building
>> >>> >> the UI, network access, maybe data-binding, and it will address
>> >>> >>building,
>> >>> >> debugging, and deploying the example.  It will pick up enough of
>> the
>> >>> >> development phase information that I don't think we'll need a
>> >>>separate
>> >>> >> section for it.
>> >>> >>
>> >>> >> I'm shutting down for tonight so I'll see what your thoughts are
>> >>>when I
>> >>> >> get going again.  I could also draft my version in a branch if you
>> >>>don't
>> >>> >> want to mess with the develop branch right now.
>> >>> >>
>> >>> >> Thoughts?
>> >>> >> -Alex
>> >>> >>
>> >>> >>
>> >>> >--
>> >>> >Andrew Wetmore
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