Hello Christina Thanks again! I just posted on SIS-177 some proposals for the points that you raised. I also published your work on the "staging" part of the website, if anyone wants to take a look:
http://sis.staging.apache.org/book/en/developer-guide.html In the "Foreword" section, I just omitted the "or French standards via AFNOR" sentence because I presume it is not of interest to the English version, and replaced "packet" by "package". You can download the modified file from [1] if you wish to continue from that point. I also took the initiative to add your name to the contributor list [2], is that okay? Martin [1] https://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/sis/site/trunk/content/book/en/developer-guide.html [2] http://sis.staging.apache.org/team-list.html Le 13/08/14 02:36, Christina Hough a écrit : > Hi Martin and Adam, > > I’ve attached what I have so far to > https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/SIS-177 - I’m a little over halfway > down the document. I’ve tried whenever possible to find the correct English > forms of technical jargon on Google, but have also included a list of terms > and sentences I’d particularly like Martin to check. Or else someone else > could check that they sound correct to a developer, at least. > > Take care, > Christina
