After some feedback from the blog folks I have an updated draft to share.
Please take a look and provide any corrections. I think it tells the bigger
story of changes coming to production, and explains our research quite well
(not the other way around!).

I simplified the language, made it about 100 words shorter, put the big
news at the top, and removed passive voice and adverbs.

https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:CKoerner_(WMF)/Work/A-B_Test_Results_1

Here's a diff
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of my slew of changes.

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Yours,
Chris Koerner
Community Liaison - Discovery
Wikimedia Foundation
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