Looks good! I did one byte's worth of copyediting—but forgot to log in so you'll never prove it was me!
One question about this claim: > That's roughly an increase of 300,000 to 1.3 million additional page views > a day into our projects! I read that to claim that people using the portal would not view those pages anyway. Would it be more accurate to say something like, "...additional page views a day from the portal into our projects!" or some such? It's always cool to reflect on how a few percentage points increase in performance can affect hundreds of thousands or even millions of people! Trey Jones Software Engineer, Discovery Wikimedia Foundation On Tue, Feb 9, 2016 at 7:06 PM, Deborah Tankersley < [email protected]> wrote: > Thanks Chris! > > I added some info back in - I thought telling a story about why we did the > testing and what we'll be going forward with was important. I know with > these additions, I made it a little word-ier, but hopefully the blog and > community folks will like it too. :) > > Here's my edits > <https://meta.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:CKoerner_(WMF)/Work/A-B_Test_Results_1&diff=15334156&oldid=15334048> > . > > Cheers, > > Deb > > -- > Deb Tankersley > Product Manager, Discovery > Wikimedia Foundation > > On Tue, Feb 9, 2016 at 2:35 PM, Chris Koerner <[email protected]> > wrote: > >> After some feedback from the blog folks I have an updated draft to share. >> Please take a look and provide any corrections. I think it tells the bigger >> story of changes coming to production, and explains our research quite well >> (not the other way around!). >> >> I simplified the language, made it about 100 words shorter, put the big >> news at the top, and removed passive voice and adverbs. >> >> >> https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:CKoerner_(WMF)/Work/A-B_Test_Results_1 >> >> Here's a diff >> <https://meta.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3ACKoerner_%28WMF%29%2FWork%2FA-B_Test_Results_1&type=revision&diff=15333867&oldid=15327844> >> of my slew of changes. >> >> -- >> Yours, >> Chris Koerner >> Community Liaison - Discovery >> Wikimedia Foundation >> >> _______________________________________________ >> discovery mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/discovery >> >> > > _______________________________________________ > discovery mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/discovery > >
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