This is pedantic, I know, but it's important to me:
I'd appreciate it if OpenSRS would please fix the following text problems
in the hard-coded part of the WHOIS reminders before they start getting
sent.
1. In the line "ICANN, the organization responsible for the stable
operation of the Domain Name System...", "Domain Name System" should not
be capitalized.
2. At the end of that sentence, there are two spaces instead of one
between "registration. Please".
3. The text says "Sincerely, {{reseller_org}}" halfway down the message,
instead of at the bottom -- that is, it includes a "signature", followed
by more text in the footer, which looks silly. The signature in the
middle should be removed; resellers can presumably add their own
signature in the footer if they wish.
4. A line reads: "Whois info for, {{domain_name}}:". In that line "Whois"
should be "WHOIS" (all uppercase), "info" should probably be
"information", and there should be no comma after "for". Even better,
this whole line could just be done away with.
If it helps, the complete message could simply read:
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Please find below the information published in the WHOIS system for the
domain name {{domain_name}}.
ICANN, the organization responsible for the stable operation of the domain
name system, has determined that inaccurate or fraudulent WHOIS data can
be grounds for a third party to contest your rights to your domain name
registration. Please take a moment to review your current WHOIS data:
{{whois_info}}
[footer]
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Thanks.
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Robert L Mathews, Tiger Technologies http://www.tigertech.net/
