Karl & Peter, Thanks so much for your feedback! The suicide comment was made by someone on the Piratepad, but it's hard to track who did it.
I know someone who can and is willing do the work to code this graphic with CSS3 and HTML5. While he's coding, we can continue to work on the substance of the comments. However, it will take some time, so the project will probably not meet our initial Monday deadline. So here are my slew of questions: - Is it worth continuing to work on this if it's going to take additional days to complete? If it continue to work on this, it might take me an additional 3-5 days (w/ my job and all) (Perhaps, releasing this at a later time, would help continue the discussion beyond the typically short lifespan of content on the Internet). I'm happy to pass off the Illustrator file to anyone who wants to build upon whatever I worked on. - What can we do to improve the structure/substance of the response? Should we select only a few parts and put more substantive annotations? This may help add a *narrative flow* to the piece. - Do you have any recommendations on resources that I can look to to beef up the substance of our comments? I'm still learning on becoming more knowledgable about the nuances and the Free Culture perspective, so this would be tremendously helpful. - What color? Thanks so much! Jennifer On Sun, Jun 24, 2012 at 9:51 PM, Peter Olson <[email protected]> wrote: > ** > At 7:16 PM -0400 6/24/12, Jennifer Baek wrote: > > On Sun, Jun 24, 2012 at 6:43 PM, Jennifer Baek <[email protected]> wrote: > > Here's a draft of what the inline commentary. I'm working on making it > 1140px wide instead 2275 px (lol). > > I would appreciate any feedback/suggestions on what else we can include, > especially towards the end of the letter. > > Thanks, > > Jennifer > > > The presentation could use a better choice of colors in the annotations. > I found the contrast, both in the white on orange, and the orange on white > notes to be low enough that it was uncomfortable to read. > > peter >
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