This one is the one: http://dev.iterating.net/meandmymom/meand%20my%20mom.jpg
I like the horizontal single chevrons for the list items. Seeing them a lot but they still look sharp. The main nav close pin paradigm is cool. The not so sure if he's a bumble bee but still smiling guy makes me smile. The read more links for the adventure land list should all be aligned to the right and the ones in the bottom touts should all have a level plane they are aligned to, the bottom. Same with the sub heading for the touts. The main content area that has the four pieces needs to be pulled together. They look like they want to be together and should be but something to tie it all together is missing. Do something like the clothesline I like so much. The search box is kind of hidden. Make it pop and be more prominent. Contrast, color, something. Something is not right with the upper left branding me and my mom. I think me and my mom should be bigger and you should blend something like that solid circle with the heart in the middle that I saw and remember from one of your other comps. Something feels strange with the color of the chevrons and the footer text. Join now for your email call to action. Not my favorite. I think you were so happy with the clothesline you ran out of gas on the rest. If you can put that into each other little area your golden. What about dad? And this one: http://dev.iterating.net/day-care/kidtown%20version%202.jpg I dig it. Things seem to be floating around and need to be grounded. I would lose the stripes going outside of the wrapper, it's kind of distracting and doesn't really serve a purpose to justify it. I'd like to see the hover states for Me and My Moms list items. Are you going to highlight the entire block? I would. Anyhow, I have no phd or anything really. You might not want to listen to me. I have another friend who is really talented, I'll send to and ask for feedback. ________________________________________________________________ Welcome to the Interaction Design Association (IxDA)! To post to this list ....... [email protected] Unsubscribe ................ http://www.ixda.org/unsubscribe List Guidelines ............ http://www.ixda.org/guidelines List Help .................. http://www.ixda.org/help
