On Thu, Sep 12, 2013 at 02:58:20PM -0500, David Parter wrote: > If I was looking, I'd be very interested! I think it is very well done! > > The only thing that I would be concerned about is this line: > > >Customers upload data via SFTP, we run lengthy analyses on that, and > >then make it all available via a web interface. > > I guess I wouldn't mention SFTP, or maybe make that explanation slightly > different. I think the way it is now it might trivialize your service, or > make it seem (to customers) like you are more garage-band than > state-of-the-art.
Indeed, I've summarized the heart of the company as a profitable entity into one sentence and three phrases. Thanks! -dsr- _______________________________________________ Discuss mailing list Discuss@lists.lopsa.org https://lists.lopsa.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/discuss This list provided by the League of Professional System Administrators http://lopsa.org/
