Alex, This is a wonderfully written release! Kudos to you!
I'd like to point you at one little thing though, if I may… YOu
use a variation of complete twice in the same sentence, which I'd
change, as in:
The entire user interface of Kiwi is completely accessible, by means
of an audio and graphical user interface.
-or
The complete user interface of Kiwi is totally accessible, by means of
an audio and graphical user interface.
as opposed to-
The complete user interface of Kiwi is completely accessible, by means
of an audio and graphical user interface.
Otherwise, as I've said, absolutely terrific job! Right on!
Smiles,
Cara :)
On Jan 5, 2009, at 7:56 PM, Alex Jurgensen wrote:
The complete user interface of Kiwi is completely accessible, by
means of an audio and graphical user interface.
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