Michael,
When you finish school (and hopefully long before then) you should
realize that almost everything you write that isn't for a teacher or
professor will be to get someone to take an action. Outside of school
telling people stuff so they will understand is a waste of time. You
want people to do something, or to stop doing something, but it is
more important that they take an action i.e. do something than that
they understand all the ramifications, etc. etc.
It looks like you have presented just about every 'fact' you dig up.
But I don't know why? Not all of those points are of utility for every
audience. I think you need to pick those 'facts' that are relevant to
your audience and only those facts and I think you need to state at
the onset why you are telling me all this?
One final point when you write remember, 'Don't tell me. Show me.'
On Apr 1, 2009, at 12:00 AM, Michael Adams wrote:
I have prepared a presentation for work and would like people to look
over it for me. It is available to view as flash or download as an
ODP.
More here:
http://whyodf.blogspot.com/
Comment either on the blog or here. I think it is an appropriate topic
here?
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Michael
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shall
be well
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