On 7/10/14 12:36 AM, Joel Jaeggli wrote:
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The existing base specification is being submitted as an Independent
  Submission to become an Informational RFC.
This implies the action is in the present when in fact the submission
already occured and in the future still will have.

"The existing base specification (draft-kucherawy-dmarc-base) was
submitted as a draft Independent Submission."

I think summarizes what happened.

I can adjust the verb tense in the sentence when I get to other nits. I think I prefer "present perfect" for this particular one. :-)

pr

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