Thank you so much, Jouni.
These issues will be fixed in the revision.
2015-10-22
Z.W. Yan
发件人： jouni korhonen
发送时间： 2015-10-22 04:54:48
收件人： Z.W. Yan
抄送： dmm; maxpassion; Jong-Hyouk Lee; xl
主题： Re: Fw: New Version Notification for draft-yan-dmm-hnprenum-03.txt
Checked the diffs and IDNits. Make always sure to comply with IDNits as it is
so easy & cheap tool to use.
- Jouni
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On Mon, Oct 12, 2015 at 6:44 PM, Z.W. Yan <[email protected]> wrote:
Dear All,
We just revised the HNP-renumbering draft based on the comments online and
offline and posted to the DMM WG.
Any further comments from you are always welcome.
Besides, Jouni and Dapeng,
Would you please assign me 5-10 minutes to re-introduce this draft in the DMM
meeting?
BR,
2015-10-13
Z.W. Yan
发件人： internet-drafts
发送时间： 2015-10-12 14:33:04
收件人： Zhiwei Yan; XiaoDong Lee; Xiaodong Lee; Jong-Hyouk Lee
抄送：
主题： New Version Notification for draft-yan-dmm-hnprenum-03.txt
A new version of I-D, draft-yan-dmm-hnprenum-03.txt
has been successfully submitted by Zhiwei Yan and posted to the
IETF repository.
Name: draft-yan-dmm-hnprenum
Revision: 03
Title: Home Network Prefix Renumbering in PMIPv6
Document date: 2015-10-11
Group: Individual Submission
Pages: 8
URL:
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-yan-dmm-hnprenum-03.txt
Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-yan-dmm-hnprenum/
Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-yan-dmm-hnprenum-03
Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-yan-dmm-hnprenum-03
Abstract:
In the basic Proxy Mobile IPv6 (PMIPv6) specification, a Mobile Node
(MN) is assigned with a 64-bit Home Network Prefix (HNP) during its
initial attachment for the Home Address (HoA) configuration. During
the movement of the MN, this prefix remains unchanged and in this way
it is unnecessary for the MN to reconfigure its HoA and reconnect the
ongoing communications. However, the current protocol (RFC5213) does
not specify related operations to support the MN to timely receive
and use a new HNP when the allocated HNP changes. In this draft, a
solution to support the HNP renumbering is proposed, as an update of
RFC5213.
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