Hi Carlos - Thanks for the review.

Sri


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On Nov 5, 2025, at 4:43 PM, CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <[email protected]> wrote:


Dear WG and document authors,

I've reviewed draft-liebsch-dmm-mts-04 (and shared my handwritten comments with 
Marco offline). For transparency and completeness, I'm sharing the most 
relevant ones here as well.

- Overall I think the document is very useful and well written. I find though 
that sometimes it's a bit hard to follow and additional figures would help.

- Figure 1 is too far from the text that makes reference to it.

- MCN term in page 4 should be expanded.

- I'd add a figure in Section 4.5.

- In section 6.2, U_mcs and D_mts are first introduced. I think they should be 
explained there.

- In section 6.3, out of my curiosity, why is RIP mentioned as an example and 
not other IGP protocols?

- Figure 10: C_rtg is depicted, but I think this is not explained in the text.

Thanks,

Carlos

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