Yeah!  I like this one a lot!  Great work Josh.  Last
time I listened to one of your tracks, I told you your
biggest weakness was in melodic ideas.  I still think
you have more room to grow in this area, but this was
an improvement.  This track has some bristling
electric sounds in it that I really dig.  

I don't really like that vocal riff that starts out
the track though.  It feels too crowded and too
prominent in the mix to me.  I think it would sound
better if you stretched it out more so the notes
weren't so close together and the sound could ring out
longer.  

That's my two cents for what it's worth.  All in all a
nice one though.

-Cory


--- Joshua Clarkson <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
wrote:
> Yeah, yet another new track, AnotherRecentTrial, now
> up on my mp3.com site (i wish they'd speed their
> approval process up a bit though, jeez)
> 
> if you've got the time, check it out and tell me
> what you think
> 
> 
> www.mp3.com/Unconscious_Mind
> 
> 
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