Thanks a lot, yeah theres still a lot i could improve with developing melodies a bit more, and i'm gradually working on improving that area....those music theory things that guy posted are quite handy
that riff at the start needs a bit more careful tweaking of filtering and stuff i think, yeah, it does seem a bit too forward thanks for taking the time to listen again...i knew i could count on you to give me some advice and feedback even if no one else bothers to listen ----- Original Message ----- From: "Cory Secrist" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> To: "Drum & Bass Arena Discussion List" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Sent: 28 December 2001 18:47 Subject: [dnb-prod] Re: Another new track > Yeah! I like this one a lot! Great work Josh. Last > time I listened to one of your tracks, I told you your > biggest weakness was in melodic ideas. I still think > you have more room to grow in this area, but this was > an improvement. This track has some bristling > electric sounds in it that I really dig. > > I don't really like that vocal riff that starts out > the track though. It feels too crowded and too > prominent in the mix to me. I think it would sound > better if you stretched it out more so the notes > weren't so close together and the sound could ring out > longer. > > That's my two cents for what it's worth. All in all a > nice one though. > > -Cory > > > --- Joshua Clarkson <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > wrote: > > Yeah, yet another new track, AnotherRecentTrial, now > > up on my mp3.com site (i wish they'd speed their > > approval process up a bit though, jeez) > > > > if you've got the time, check it out and tell me > > what you think > > > > > > www.mp3.com/Unconscious_Mind > > > > > > --- > > Drum&Bass Arena Producers Discussion List > > http://www.breakbeat.co.uk > > You are currently subscribed to dnb-prod as: > > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > To unsubscribe send a blank email to > > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > > > > __________________________________________________ > Do You Yahoo!? > Send your FREE holiday greetings online! > http://greetings.yahoo.com > > --- > Drum&Bass Arena Producers Discussion List http://www.breakbeat.co.uk > You are currently subscribed to dnb-prod as: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > To unsubscribe send a blank email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] --- Drum&Bass Arena Producers Discussion List http://www.breakbeat.co.uk You are currently subscribed to dnb-prod as: [email protected] To unsubscribe send a blank email to [EMAIL PROTECTED]
