Arrgh, truncated

But if folks could read the diffs at least:

https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-tls-profiles-10

we can get the ADs to approve and clear their DISCUSS positions to move
this forward.

thanks
tim


On Mon, Jul 3, 2017 at 5:15 PM, tjw ietf <[email protected]> wrote:

> All
>
> The diffs between -09 and -10 are fairly large as they address the issues
> raised during IESG review.  Before we go and poke the ADs to clear their
> DISCUSS positions, we want to make sure the WG has reviewed Sarah's updates.
>
> I know everyone is busily updating their latest set of drafts before the
> cutoff so I don't expect anything for a few days. But if folks could read
> the diffs at least:
>
>
> On Fri, Jun 16, 2017 at 4:52 AM, Sara Dickinson <[email protected]> wrote:
>
>> Hi All,
>>
>> Here is an update to the draft which attempts to address the majority of
>> the comments received during IESG review so far. Given the number and
>> extent of the changes I would request further careful review of this
>> version, particularly from the working group.
>>
>> Changes are:
>>
>> * Clarified the specific attacks the Usage Profiles mitigate against.
>> * Revised wording in the draft relating to 'security/privacy guarantees’
>> and generally improved consistency of wording throughout the document.
>> * Corrected and added a number of references:
>>    - RFC7924 is now Normative
>>    - RFC7918 and RFC8094 are now Normative (and therefore Downrefs)
>>    - draft-ietf-tls-tls13, draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy,RFC3315 and
>> RFC7227 added
>> * Terminology: Update definition of Privacy-enabling DNS server and moved
>> normative definition to section 4.
>> * Section 5 and 6.3: Included discussion of the additional attacks
>> possible when using meta-queries to bootstrap the DNS service
>> * Section 5: Added sentence on why Opportunistic Profile may fallback for
>> latency reasons.
>> * Section 5.1: Added discussion of when clients might change Usage
>> Profiles.
>> * Section 6.4: Added caveat on use of combined authentication re RFC7469.
>> * Section 6.5: Added more detail on how authentication results might be
>> used in Opportunistic.  Opportunistic clients now SHOULD try for the best
>> case.
>> * Section 7.3: Re-worked this section and the discussion of DHCP.
>> * Section 9: Removed unnecessary text, added condition on use of RFC7250
>> (Raw public keys).
>> * Section 11.: More detail on padding policies.
>> * Numerous editorial corrections.
>>
>> Regards
>>
>> Sara.
>>
>> > On 16 Jun 2017, at 09:49, [email protected] wrote:
>> >
>> >
>> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> > This draft is a work item of the DNS PRIVate Exchange of the IETF.
>> >
>> >        Title           : Usage and (D)TLS Profiles for DNS-over-(D)TLS
>> >        Authors         : Sara Dickinson
>> >                          Daniel Kahn Gillmor
>> >                          Tirumaleswar Reddy
>> >       Filename        : draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-tls-profiles-10.txt
>> >       Pages           : 29
>> >       Date            : 2017-06-16
>> >
>> > Abstract:
>> >   This document discusses Usage Profiles, based on one or more
>> >   authentication mechanisms, which can be used for DNS over Transport
>> >   Layer Security (TLS) or Datagram TLS (DTLS).  These profiles can
>> >   increase the privacy of DNS transactions compared to using only clear
>> >   text DNS.  This document also specifies new authentication mechanisms
>> >   - it describes several ways a DNS client can use an authentication
>> >   domain name to authenticate a (D)TLS connection to a DNS server.
>> >   Additionally, it defines (D)TLS protocol profiles for DNS clients and
>> >   servers implementing DNS-over-(D)TLS.  This document updates RFC
>> >   7858.
>> >
>> >
>> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-
>> tls-profiles/
>> >
>> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-tls-profiles-10
>> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dprive-dtls
>> -and-tls-profiles-10
>> >
>> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and
>> -tls-profiles-10
>> >
>> >
>> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>> submission
>> > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>> >
>> > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>> >
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