Stéphane,

This is a little late in the process as the BCP has been approved last Thursday 
after IESG review ;-)

OTOH, this is editorial changes and do not change the core of the document.

So, I suggest to upload quickly a new revision before it goes in the RFC Editor 
queue (where those changes could still happen in AUTH48 state). You, Sara, and 
I are in European time zone, so, let's act quickly this Monday morning

-éric

-----Original Message-----
From: Stephane Bortzmeyer <bortzme...@nic.fr>
Organization: NIC France
Date: Saturday, 11 July 2020 at 09:48
To: Sara Dickinson <s...@sinodun.com>
Cc: DNS Privacy Working Group <dns-privacy@ietf.org>, Eric Vyncke 
<evyn...@cisco.com>
Subject: Re: [dns-privacy] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-13.txt

    On Fri, Jul 10, 2020 at 09:41:07AM +0100,
     Sara Dickinson <s...@sinodun.com> wrote 
     a message of 61 lines which said:

    > This version should address the final comments from the IESG review.

    Some very small editorial details:

    Abstract "to assist writers of a Recursive operator Privacy statement"
    Capital S, for the acronym.

    Section 1 "These open resolvers have tended" Rather "public resolvers"
    to be consistent with the rest of the paragraph and with RFC 8499.

    Section 5.3.1 "Run a copy of the root zone on loopback [RFC7706]"
    should now be written "Run a local copy of the root zone [RFC8806]".

    Appendix D.2 "Both POST and GET are supported" Can probably be deleted
    since RFC 8484 says "DoH servers MUST implement both the POST and GET
    methods."



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