Hi Eric, The authors did ask Phillip directly if he had specific text changes he would like to see following his review during the first IETF Last Call: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dns-privacy/Iu7lg5AvF9Mx4Tu-gflASArOF8A/
However we did not get a reply and so we attempted to address that review in the -09 update (published on 9th February) based on a github issue with discussion points and a PR referenced in this email: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dns-privacy/oRHkyjhupzQj0HApzLprvE4V7_s/ Since we didn’t get any further feedback on this review during the second IETF LC, I’m hoping those updates addressed the points raised. FYI - we have a pending PR to fix the minor issue noted in the latest IANA review, which was the only comment we got during the second IETF LC. So we’ll publish the -10 update with this correction shortly. Regards Sara. > On 23 Feb 2022, at 09:47, Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <[email protected]> wrote: > > The IETF-wide last call has expired and AFAIK there was only one detailed > review by Phillip Hallam-Baker for the security directorate (added in cc): > https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/last-call/L23bWOxP54NZQPHT7DfRBxZAOCw/ > > What is the authors/WG plan to address the "has issues" of this review ? You > probably know that the cut-off date is Monday 7th of March. > > As a plain engineer (and without any hat), it appears to me that the Wi-Fi > hotspot issue is not limited to DoQ but is also relevant to DoH. And the > traffic analysis part is probably addressed already with the padding. > > With my AD hat, the points about 'outdated' security considerations and > privacy vs. confidentiality should be addressed in the document (happy to be > corrected of course). Anyway, it would be nice to answer to PHB. > > Regards > > -éric > > > -----Original Message----- > From: dns-privacy <[email protected]> on behalf of DraftTracker > Mail System <[email protected]> > Date: Wednesday, 23 February 2022 at 09:43 > To: "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, > "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, > "[email protected]" <[email protected]>, > Eric Vyncke <[email protected]> > Cc: "[email protected]" <[email protected]> > Subject: [dns-privacy] Last Call Expired: <draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-09.txt> > > > Please DO NOT reply to this email. > > I-D: <draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-09.txt> > Datatracker URL: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic/ > > IETF Last Call has ended, and the state has been changed to > Waiting for AD Go-Ahead. > > > _______________________________________________ > dns-privacy mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dns-privacy > _______________________________________________ dns-privacy mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dns-privacy
