Nits and notes: Abstract: O: The DNS is considered a crucial part of that technical infrastrcuture. P: The DNS is considered a crucial part of that technical infrastructure. C: s/infrastrcuture/infrastructure/ -- typo.
Background: O: ...servers to enable robust dand resilient… P: ...servers to enable robust and resilient… C: s/dand/and/ -- typo. 1.4: O: ...temporary simulatneous loss of many… P: ...temporary simultaneous loss of many… C: s/simulatneous/simultaneous/ -- typo. 3.2.1: O: ...for TSIG and DNSSEC syncronization… P: ...for TSIG and DNSSEC synchronization… C: s/syncronization/synchronization/ -- typo. 3.2.6: O: Servers must log in UTC to facilitate log comparison. C: Seems a little strong -- If I want to log in fortnights since lunar eclipse, that's my business -- as long as I'm willing to convert the log to UTC before handing it to be analyzed. 3.2.8: O: "The server should be protected from attacks based on source routing. The server must not soley rely on address- or name-based authentication." C: Seems like it should have more text. Not entirely sure what is being said here. also: s/soley/solely/ -- typo. 3.3.6: O: ...based on the currnet update cycle… P: ...based on the current update cycle… C: s/currnet/current/ -- typo. 3.3.10: O: These monitoring processes could be automated. P: These monitoring processes should be automated. 4.2: C: See "draft-mcpherson-unique-origin-as-00" (expired). Neither supporting nor opposing the draft, just mentioning it. 5.1: O: ... a scheduled maintaince window… P: ... a scheduled maintenance window… C: s/maintaince/maintenance/ --typo. W On Feb 1, 2012, at 7:11 AM, [email protected] wrote: > > The Root Server System Advisory Committee of ICANN has been working on a > revision to RFC 2870. > It is currently posted as: > > ------------ > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > > Title : Root Name Server Operational Requirements > Author(s) : Root Server System Advisory Committee > Filename : draft-rssac-dnsop-rfc2870bis-03.txt > Pages : 9 > Date : 2012-01-31 > > As the Internet has become critical to the world's social and economic > infrastructure, attention has focused on the correct, safe, reliable, and > secure operation of the Internet infrastructure itself. The DNS is > considered > a crucial part of that technical infrastrcuture. The root domain and its > authoritative name servers are a part of that technical infrastructure. > > The primary focus of this document is to provide guidelines for secure, > stable, > and resilient authoritative name service for the root zone. Additionally it > will > look into some specifics for the operation of the name servers. Other > operators > of authoritative name servers such as those for generic top-level domains > (gTLDs), > country code top-level domains (ccTLDs) and other zones may also find it > useful. > > A URL for this Internet-Draft is: > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-rssac-dnsop-rfc2870bis-03.txt > ------------ > > Your comments would be appreciated. > > /bill > _______________________________________________ > DNSOP mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop > -- Don't be impressed with unintelligible stuff said condescendingly. -- Radia Perlman. _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
