will fold them in, thanks.

/bill

On Sun, Feb 05, 2012 at 11:34:06AM -0500, Warren Kumari wrote:
> Nits and notes:
> 
> Abstract: 
> O: The DNS is considered a crucial part of that technical infrastrcuture.
> P: The DNS is considered a crucial part of that technical infrastructure.
> C: s/infrastrcuture/infrastructure/   -- typo.
> 
> Background:
> O: ...servers to enable robust dand resilientb&
> P: ...servers to enable robust and resilientb&
> C: s/dand/and/ -- typo.
> 
> 1.4:
> O: ...temporary simulatneous loss of manyb&
> P: ...temporary simultaneous loss of manyb&
> C: s/simulatneous/simultaneous/ -- typo.
> 
> 3.2.1:
> O: ...for TSIG and DNSSEC syncronizationb&
> P: ...for TSIG and DNSSEC synchronizationb&
> C: s/syncronization/synchronization/ -- typo.
> 
> 3.2.6:
> O: Servers must log in UTC to facilitate log comparison.
> C: Seems a little strong -- If I want to log in fortnights since lunar 
> eclipse, that's my business -- as long as I'm willing to convert the log to 
> UTC before handing it to be analyzed.
> 
> 3.2.8:
> O: "The server should be protected from attacks based on source routing.  The 
> server must not soley rely on address- or name-based authentication."
> C: Seems like it should have more text. Not entirely sure what is being said 
> here.
> also: s/soley/solely/ -- typo.
> 
> 3.3.6:
> O: ...based on the currnet update cycleb&
> P: ...based on the current update cycleb&
> C: s/currnet/current/ -- typo.
> 
> 3.3.10:
> O: These monitoring processes could be automated. 
> P: These monitoring processes should be automated. 
> 
> 4.2:
> C: See "draft-mcpherson-unique-origin-as-00" (expired). Neither supporting 
> nor opposing the draft, just mentioning it.
> 
> 5.1: 
> O: ... a scheduled maintaince windowb&
> P: ... a scheduled maintenance windowb&
> C: s/maintaince/maintenance/ --typo.
> 
> 
> W
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> On Feb 1, 2012, at 7:11 AM, [email protected] wrote:
> 
> > 
> > The Root Server System Advisory Committee of ICANN has been working on a 
> > revision to RFC 2870.
> > It is currently posted as:
> > 
> > ------------
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> > directories.
> > 
> >       Title           : Root Name Server Operational Requirements
> >       Author(s)       : Root Server System Advisory Committee
> >       Filename        : draft-rssac-dnsop-rfc2870bis-03.txt
> >       Pages           : 9
> >       Date            : 2012-01-31
> > 
> >  As the Internet has become critical to the world's social and economic
> >  infrastructure, attention has focused on the correct, safe, reliable, and
> >  secure operation of the Internet infrastructure itself.  The DNS is 
> > considered
> >  a crucial part of that technical infrastrcuture. The root domain and its
> >  authoritative name servers are a part of that technical infrastructure.
> > 
> >  The primary focus of this document is to provide guidelines for secure, 
> > stable,
> >  and resilient authoritative name service for the root zone. Additionally 
> > it will
> >  look into some specifics for the operation of the name servers.  Other 
> > operators
> >  of authoritative name servers such as those for generic top-level domains 
> > (gTLDs),
> >  country code top-level domains (ccTLDs) and other zones may also find it 
> > useful.
> > 
> > A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
> > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-rssac-dnsop-rfc2870bis-03.txt
> > ------------
> > 
> > Your comments would be appreciated.
> > 
> > /bill
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> 
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> Don't be impressed with unintelligible stuff said condescendingly.
>     -- Radia Perlman.
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
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