On Wed, 11 Mar 2015 16:50:07 +0000, Paul Hoffman wrote: > > >> I'd prefer the simpler "The problem statement is described in ..". > >> The term "exposed" in my mind carries a more sensational connotation, > >> but I might be nitpicking. > > > > Advice from english writers here? > > +1 to Shumon: "exposed" is more sensational, and not appropriate here.
Indeed, "exposed" is inappropriate; so is "described". Reference to _describing_ the problem statement (perhaps as "elegant" or "clumsy"; "long-winded" or "concise") isn't what's needed here. I suggest any one of "presented", "declared", or "specified". ATB Niall O'Reilly _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
