I'm also somewhat confused by the quoting in:
"In the case of the "SRV" "RR" and "URI" "RR", distinguishing among
different types"  (and in "defining "RR"s that might" ) - I'm not sure if
it is intentional, but it doesn't align with much of the rest of the
formatting, and is (IMO) confusing around the first part.)

That's xml2rfc being helpful. The xml says those are verbatim strings and it added the quotes. I presume the editors can fix this.

Probably nit: Section 2:
"Only global underscored names are registered in the IANA Underscore
Only the global underscored names "_service1", "_service2", Global
table.  (From the example, that would mean registering "_service3",
"_service4", and "_authority" are registered in the IANA _service1,
_service2, _service3, _service 4, and _authority.)"

First sentence repeats.

In xml it is clear that two lines of old text weren't deleted.

I stared at the table of names and I think it's right, but it's the meat of the document and more people looking at it would be good.

Regards,
John Levine, jo...@iecc.com, Primary Perpetrator of "The Internet for Dummies",
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