> On Oct 7, 2020, at 2:47 AM, Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <[email protected]> 
> wrote:
> 
> Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-zone-digest-12: No Objection
> 
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> Thank you for the work put into this document. I really like the idea of
> protecting the zone integrity even at rest.
> 
> Please find below one non-blocking COMMENT points and one nit. I would really
> appreciate a reply for my comment about section 1.2.
> 
> I hope that this helps to improve the document,
> 
> Regards,
> 
> -éric
> 
> == COMMENTS ==
> -- Section 1.2 --
> Why is draft-ietf-dprive-xfr-over-tls not mentioned in this section as an
> alternative for data on the move?

Just an oversight.  The document does (did) mention "a future version of 
DNS-over-TLS"
which I think was meant as a reference to draft-ietf-dprive-xfr-over-tls when 
that was
just getting started.  Ben pointed this out as well and I suggest changing the 
text to this:

   The Transport Layer Security protocol suite also provides channel
   security.  The DPRIVE working group is in the process of specifying
   DNS Zone Transfer-over-TLS [I-D.ietf-dprive-xfr-over-tls].


> 
> == NITS ==
> -- Section 1.4.3 --
> Suggest to add "(RPZ)" after the first use of the expansion.
> 


Done.

DW


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