Hi Stefan,
Thanks for your review!
On 1/19/26 10:41, Stefan Ubbink wrote:
I've read the document and have some remarks.
# 1. Introduction
What is meant by 'the registry can effect parent-side changes to the delare
reviewers not egation' ? Maybe my english is not sufficient, but I don't
understand what is written there.
I have to admit that my English is insufficient for that, too ;-)
Somehow some superfluous characters had been pasted there. Fixed as follows:
OLD
registry can effect parent-side changes to the delare reviewers not
egation. In such a situation, additional questions arise.
NEW
registry can effect parent-side changes to the delegation. In such a
situation, additional questions arise.
# 5.2. Analysis
In the sentence 'Registrars or (less commonly) registries can obtain the information from
the registrant through another channel (such as a non-automated "manual update"
via webform submission), and relay it to the registry.' for me it reads as the registry
is notifying the registry. Maybe it can be rewritten to get rid of that, but keeping it
as it is now is also acceptable to me.
True. In fact, to my knowledge the registry does not have a DS submission form
in the RRR model. Thus, fixed as follows:
OLD
* Registrars or (less commonly) registries can obtain the
information from the registrant through another channel (such as a
non-automated "manual update" via webform submission), and relay
it to the registry.
NEW
* The registrar can obtain the information from the registrant
through another channel (such as a non-automated "manual update"
via webform submission), and relay it to the registry.
# 5.2.3. Concurrent Automatic Updates
In the last paragraph of the section, 'RFC 6781' is no link in the html version.
Fixed.
I've also harmonized some terminology, and added a clarification that manual DS
provisioning is not necessarily subject to the same acceptance checks as DS
automation. (That's already clear as the document does not relate to manual
submissions, but it's good to prevent confusion.)
FWIW, folks can follow along the aggregate of WGLC changes here:
https://github.com/desec-io/draft-ietf-dnsop-ds-automation/compare/draft-ietf-dnsop-ds-automation-02...main
Best,
Peter
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