James, this is great stuff! Thanks!
I have a couple of general comments that I think apply to both procedures:
* After the opening heading in each procedure, I think it would be helpful to
introduce the first bullet list. For example, something like,
This procedure describes how to complete the following
required tasks to run OpenSolaris in VMware {Fusion for Mac |
Workstation}:
* How to set up a virtual machine guest
* How to install OpenSolaris as a guest
...
* Kind of a general nit, but I expected the each step number and text to
precede the supporting graphic rather than follow it. It seems to make more
sense to me to do it that way. (If you're amenable to this change, I'd be happy
to help go through and do that.)
-alan
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