On 5/11/2009 4:11 PM, alan mcclellan wrote:
> James, this is great stuff! Thanks!
>
> I have a couple of general comments that I think apply to both procedures:
>
> * After the opening heading in each procedure, I think it would be helpful to
> introduce the first bullet list. For example, something like,
>
> This procedure describes how to complete the following
> required tasks to run OpenSolaris in VMware {Fusion for Mac |
> Workstation}:
>
> * How to set up a virtual machine guest
> * How to install OpenSolaris as a guest
> ...
>
> * Kind of a general nit, but I expected the each step number and text to
> precede the supporting graphic rather than follow it. It seems to make more
> sense to me to do it that way. (If you're amenable to this change, I'd be
> happy to help go through and do that.)
>
> -alan
>
You're right... I did the other way because I function graphically
before textual, but it wouldn't suit normal people. Go ahead and make
the modification. The difference between each article is the start
point of the shared slides (After the VMware BIOS splash), and the last
two (71, 72) on Fusion which are more or less noted as a preventive
measure. I suppose I would need to reset the message dialogs on
Workstation which I formerly hid to capture those for Workstation also,
if you need the consistency, otherwise add the two steps or an addendum
stating that using the tools could most likely break things.
- James
