> The near-final copy of the Getting Started Guide is posted at:
>
> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/getstart2.pdf

I am a bit confused by the first paragraph under "Live CD and Installer"
on page 6.  It seems that "nwamd" was replaced by the reference to
chapter 5.

On page 7, in the first paragraph under "Image Packaging System (IPS CLI)"
I would add a "(CLI)" after "command-line interface", similar to
"(IPS)" after "Image Packaging System".  Wouldn't take up much space
so it shouldn't hurt.

On page 23, the "zpool attach" command is explained.  The text
says "The following example illustrates a ZFS file system setup with a
nonredundant configuration:".  But the output of "zpool status"
shows a mirror vdev, i.e. a redundant configuration.

Page 25, 4th line from the bottom:

  "The contents of the GRUB menu.lst file dictate what..."

sounds a little less harsh when changed to

  "The contents of the GRUB menu.lst file define what..."

On page 37, the word "Syntax:" preceding the pkg image-update
command is inconsistent with all the other code examples.  Just
omit the "Syntax:".


Regards -- Volker
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