Hi Rainer, Thanks for reviewing Chapter 7. I'm grateful for your feedback. See my replies inline.
Cheers, Alysson >Again, my apologies for being late. It's been quite a month. I'm still trying >to figure out where August went, and now it's already November. Well, I don't even know where the year went! >I found very little to nit-pick on this revision. Another job well done. :-) Thanks. :-) >The few notes I have are: > >Contents - still list "Avoid Abbreviations ..." I suspect this is a tool >issue and will go away when the segment actually gets dropped. Yep. It's another artifact of change tracking. It will go away when the changes are accepted. >p. 16 - Under "Do Not Arbitrarily ..." The second sentence starts with "Nor >should you..." I would suggest changing it to: "...in your document, nor >should you..." I think this is less awkward (and satisfies the rigorous >enforcers of the "Do not start a sentence with..." folks). Sounds good. I'll go ahead and change that. >Index: Under "international audiences", the first entry is "abbreviations and >acronyms and," This seems awkward with the double "and." I'm not sure how >best to clean it up; I have a few different ideas. The easiest may be to >change the first "and" to a comma. Or maybe just drop the second "and" ?? Good catch. I agree it's awkward. I'll go ahead and drop the second "and." >That's about it. I must admit that I did not read through the entire chapter, >word by word, with the usual plodding diligence I use for these reviews, so >I'm hoping nothing has slipped past. Again, my apologies. No need to apologize. Any amount of time and effort you can provide is much appreciated. This message posted from opensolaris.org
