On page 202, second paragraph, there is mention of the impact of double-posting index entries on one's schedule. I would suggest making this comment more generic, as OpenSolaris authors will probably not be writing under any fixed schedule.
For example: "..., but remember that double-posting index entries will increase the time creating the index will take." That would still imply the schedule issues Sun contributors would have to pay attention to, while making more sense for non-Sun contributors. Then, on page 219, first paragraph, I would recommend changing "Sun documentation" to "technical documentation" to make it more generalized. This would work for both Sun and non-Sun authors (and maybe OpenSolaris authors, too ;-) ). Do these make sense? Rainer This message posted from opensolaris.org
