Hi, I've taken the first step toward addressing your comments on the Intro to OS document. Please have a look at the new Doc Reviews page I've created at http://opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation/reviews to find a link to the latest copy of the document.
New changes to the content are indicated by change bars in margins and underlining/strikethrough in the running text of the PDF. I have also added writer and reviewer remarks where I have follow-up questions. These are summarized on p.3. Please let me know that I've interpreted your comments correctly, then I will begin to gather and write content for the new pieces, posting new drafts as I go. Most of the interesting changes are in the ZFS chapter, where I've put together a new list of possible lessons that are more developer oriented. Thanks again for your help! Regards, Michelle This message posted from opensolaris.org
