Hi :) I have checked just for spellings not even a grammar check. 1. Changed a couple of titles to Title Case rather than normal sentence. 2. Should <br> be <br />? I didn't change it. 3. There was a subsection covering Debian & Ubuntu that had a "su" command. Presumably Debian doesn't have "sudo" but Ubuntu does. So, i split that sub-section into 2 sub-sections; one for Debian and another for Ubuntu. If Debian does use sudo then the 2 sub-sections could be recombined. Later on a subsection for Debian & Ubuntu does use "sudo" for both distros. 4. Is Suse correct? I thought their name was now openSUSE http://distrowatch.com/table.php?distribution=suse So, i changed all to openSUSE. 5. 1 instance of libreoffice changed to LibreOffice because it was not in a url or command-line command or other code, just a tpyo i think. 6. Can the source-code tarballs be used in Hurd distros aswell as Linux ones? Can they be used in BSD OSes? Is the plural of Linux = Linuxes, Linii, Linices or distros? The term 'Distros' may be changing slightly to include other unix-based platforms. 7. i changed "dropdown" to "drop-down" 8. Titles shouldn't have <br> at the end right? 9. QuickStarter looked fine as it's camel-case and seems to be a name of something? 10. I changed a title from "Un-Installing a Previous Version of LibreOffice" to just "Un-Installing LibreOffice" to make the section more useful. Added a line to say that un-installing previous versions is a smart plan. 11. I think "deselect" should be changed to "de-select" but i left it as it was. It was consistent through the document so i guessed it might widely used in the rest of documentation in which case it is better to stay consistent for a little niggle like this.
I thought i had proof-read this document before as many of the errors were tiny issues that i had corrected somewhere before. These things take a lot less time 2nd time around so i am not worried about that but it does worry me that i might have followed a wrong work-flow and stuffed something up for someone else? For a wiki i should just click on the "Edit" tab at the top, do the changes, add a summary of the changes made and click on "Save Page" at the bottom? Regards from Tom :) ________________________________ From: David Nelson <[email protected]> To: [email protected] Sent: Sun, 16 January, 2011 9:22:12 Subject: Re: [libreoffice-documentation] Contributing Hi Tom, :-) http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Installing_LibreOffice_on_Linux David Nelson -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/documentation/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity *** -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to [email protected] List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/documentation/ *** All posts to this list are publicly archived for eternity ***
