Hello Samantha 1st question — not sure why Sidebar is capitalised. Easily changed when I create 2nd draft.
2nd question — it is a note. Warning header, in my opinion, should not be used at all. There is no danger to life or serious risk of injury, which is what a warning is all about. Definition of a warning comes from ISO rules. Also, in my opinion, caution should not be used. There is no real danger of causing a malfunction of equipment. In software guides there is only a need for notes and tips. Had a quick look at your suggestions and you have made some good points. Moving figures would create large white spaces in the document. In my opinion, too much white space in a document is something to be avoided. It looks very unprofessional. I am of the old school where user guides used to be printed. Regards Peter Schofield psaut...@gmail.com > On 14 Aug 2020, at 14:47, Samantha Hamilton <samanthahamilton0...@gmail.com> > wrote: > > Hi Peter, and Team, > > I have completed a first pass review of Impress Chapter 3 and uploaded it to > the Feedback folder (changes noted on the Status Spreadsheet). Peter, you > mentioned in an email to Felipe that "the template for version 7.0 is not > 100% set in stone." As such, I did not investigate too deeply the finite > formatting details. I do have a few quick questions, though, and perhaps they > are template-related questions: > Why is Sidebar capitalized, but main menu bar and toolbar are not? > Was there a decision made about the Note header on page 2 to be re-styled as > a Warning header? > Overall, I thought the writing was very clear and concise---I was able to > follow all the directions easily. > Cheers, > Sam. > > Samantha Hamilton > darling docs > > <https://darlingdocs.wordpress.com/> <https://github.com/samanthahamilton> > <https://www.linkedin.com/in/shamilton-64b4b71b0/> > > > On Thu, Aug 13, 2020 at 10:14 AM Samantha Hamilton > <samanthahamilton0...@gmail.com <mailto:samanthahamilton0...@gmail.com>> > wrote: > Hi Peter, and Team, > > I have downloaded Impress Chapter 3 for first review. Expected return date is > Saturday the 15th. Just a quick note: I've been getting a "502 Bad Gateway" > error on the Status Spreadsheet, but I will try again later to update that > page. > > Cheers, > Sam. > > Samantha Hamilton > darling docs > > <https://darlingdocs.wordpress.com/> <https://github.com/samanthahamilton> > <https://www.linkedin.com/in/shamilton-64b4b71b0/> > > > On Fri, Aug 7, 2020 at 10:32 AM Peter Schofield <psaut...@gmail.com > <mailto:psaut...@gmail.com>> wrote: > Chapter 3 Adding and Formatting Text for the Impress Guide 7.0 has been > uploaded to the Drafts folder on NextCloud and is ready for review and > comment. > > This chapter has been rewritten for two reasons. > > 1. The changes in Version 7.0 required a rewrite of the old version of the > chapter. > > 2. The old version of this chapter was very poorly written and probably by > someone who was not experienced in writing software guides. It was confusing > and difficult to follow in some instances. Hopefully I have now corrected > that problem. > > One comment I must make is that whoever wrote Version 4.3 of this chapter did > not add their name to the contributors list at the front of the guide. My > name appears there as the last contributor and makes it look like I wrote > this version of Chapter 3. I definitely did not and the text is definitely > not my style or quality. > > If anybody writes a chapter or does a review and comment, then PLEASE add > your name to th contributors list. > > Regards > Peter Schofield > psaut...@gmail.com <mailto:psaut...@gmail.com> > > > > > -- > To unsubscribe e-mail to: documentation+unsubscr...@global.libreoffice.org > <mailto:documentation%2bunsubscr...@global.libreoffice.org> > Problems? > https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ > <https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/> > Posting guidelines + more: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette > <https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette> > List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ > <https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/> > Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy > <https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy> > -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: documentation+unsubscr...@global.libreoffice.org Problems? https://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: https://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/documentation/ Privacy Policy: https://www.documentfoundation.org/privacy
