Jean,

Must say, that was awesome!
That kind of feedback would take me at least two weeks!! Thank you very
much for that!

As soon as I manage to take a look at the guide and apply your suggestions
I will let everyone know!

Best regards,
Felipe Viggiano

Em seg., 2 de nov. de 2020 às 04:48, Jean Weber <[email protected]>
escreveu:

> Errors found in PDF on first pass through:
> Figure 27 (page 47) is missing.
> Top of page 92: the 3) does not line up with other numbers.
> Page 94, under Find toolbar: the kust numbers do not line up.
> Page 100: list does not restart at 1).
> Page 104, bottom: style of intro sentence ("The data ranges may
> include:") should be changed to keep with next paragraph so it goes to
> top of next page.
> Page 120, top: For consistency in headings, change D and P on "Data
> Points" to d and p.
> Page 138: Under "Method Two" the 1) does not line up with other list
> numbers.
> Page 142: The 3) does not line up with other list numbers.
> Page 190: the bullet symbol for the first "Distributed" item is not
> the same as all the other bullet symbols in that list.
> Page 208, bottom: 6) is not in line with other numbers in the list.
> Page 210, bottom: list numbers do not line up.
> Page 213, bottom: list numbers do not line up.
> Page 216-217, under Aligning images: list numbers do not line up.
> Page 225, top: heading should probably be "More Printing Options dialog".
> Page 225: list does not restart at 1.
> Page 226, below Note: list item 1) does not line up with others.
> Page 232: first list item 3) does not line up with others.
> Page 253: Table 6 caption is not in Caption style.
> Page 327, Figure 308 and its caption are missing from the PDF.
> Page 334: list number 1) does not line up with others.
> Page 336: Figure 317 and its caption are missing from the PDF.
> Page 368 has a green symbol and a line under the figure. Need to remove.
> Page 385: list numbers do not line up.
> Page 403: list number 3) does not line up.
> Page 421: list does not restart at 1. List numbers do not line up.
> Page 427: Figure 432 is missing in PDF
> Page 428:: The paragraph at the bottom should probably be in Numbered
> List style and have a number.
> Page 432-433: list numbers do not line up.
> Page 435: list numbers before and after Fig 443 do not line up.
> Page 450-451, 458-459, 465, 469: several figures (and captions) are
> missing in PDF.
> Pages 471-489 are blank in PDF, except for footers.
> Page 490-491: Indentation of paragraphs, and space between Definition
> term and first paragraph, are inconsistent.
> Page 530: list numbers do not line up.
>
> Recommendations (not actually errors):
> Page 107: I recommend moving some text from next 2 pages (paragraph at
> bottom of p 108 and Tip, paragraph, and Note at top of page 109) to
> the bottom of this page, to avoid the big blank space.
> Page 150-151: I recommend moving steps 3) and 4) from page 151 to page
> 150. If you do that, make some of the list items at the top of page
> 152 "keep with next" .
> Page 189, bottom: make first bullet point under Alignment tab "keep
> with next" to move to next page.
> Page 267, bottom: make paragraph "do no break" so it moves to the next
> page.
> Page 387: move steps 7,8,9 (and Note) to page 386.
> Page 424: move steps from bottom of page to page 423, to avoid large
> blank space.
> Page 520: start macOS keyboard shortcuts on next page, so it's easier
> for someone to print out if they want the list. Also, delete the H3
> repeat of the heading that's in the H2 just above.
>
> Jean
>
>
>
> On Mon, Nov 2, 2020 at 3:22 PM Jean Weber <[email protected]> wrote:
> >
> > Felipe,
> > I will take a look. I almost always find problems in the compiled
> > version that everyone else missed.
> > Jean
> >
> > On Mon, Nov 2, 2020 at 11:23 AM Felipe Viggiano
> > <[email protected]> wrote:
> > >
> > > Hello everyone,
> > >
> > > Just uploaded CG7012-Macros in the Published folder.
> > >
> > > Kees:
> > > Thanks again for the effort, all of your suggestions were incorporated,
> > > including the new Note paragraph.
> > >
> > > Steve:
> > > Regarding Olivier's contribution to the chapter, I was able to
> understand
> > > everything that was explained, so I did not make any major
> suggestions. The
> > > only thing I did was adding a link to the Macro help page on the end
> (the
> > > previous link points straight to VBASupport Statement).
> > >
> > > About the Calc Guide:
> > > Just uploaded a first version of the compiled Calc Guide on the
> feedback
> > > folder based. There are three versions: .odm, .odt, and .pdf.
> > > I'm still working on it, but I put there in case anyone wants to take a
> > > look and give some comments before the final version.
> > >
> > > Olivier:
> > > The cover images on the .odm file were very heavy on my computer, so I
> > > exported them to .png and re-inserted them back, but I don if this is
> the
> > > right way to manage this, is there any suggestion?
> > >
> > > Have a great week everyone!
> > >
> > > Best regards,
> > > Felipe Viggiano
> > >
> > > Em sáb., 31 de out. de 2020 às 16:59, Felipe Viggiano <
> > > [email protected]> escreveu:
> > >
> > > > Thanks once again Steve,
> > > >
> > > > So I'm going to proceed in that direction and start to compile the
> > > > chapters in one using Olivier's .odm file.
> > > > As soon as I manage to get all the chapters together I let you know.
> > > >
> > > > Best regards,
> > > > Felipe Viggiano
> > > >
> > > > Em sex., 30 de out. de 2020 às 06:54, Steve Fanning <
> > > > [email protected]> escreveu:
> > > >
> > > >> Hi Felipe,
> > > >>
> > > >> With regards to a possible Toolbars appendix, I'm not sure much has
> > > >> changed since August 31st, when I wrote: "I have concluded that at
> this
> > > >> stage, including such an appendix in the guide might do more harm
> than
> > > >> good. Consequently, my current intention is to progress the 7.0 Calc
> > > >> Guide without a Toolbars appendix.". I would still be in favour of
> NOT
> > > >> trying to include it in the CG at this time.
> > > >>
> > > >> I am in favour of publishing now, with one review as you suggest. My
> > > >> only slight concern might be Chapter 12 (Macros), only because I
> believe
> > > >> that Olivier made some significant changes (including new material)
> at
> > > >> first review. If it would help, I would be happy to review the new
> > > >> material before issue.
> > > >>
> > > >> Regards,
> > > >>
> > > >> Steve
> > > >>
> > > >>
> > > >> On 30/10/2020 04:23, Felipe Viggiano wrote:
> > > >> > Thank you very much for that Olivier!
> > > >> >
> > > >> > Updates on the Calc Guide 7.0:
> > > >> >
> > > >> > The chapters CG7010-LinkingData and CG-7011-SharingAndReviewing
> are now
> > > >> on
> > > >> > the Published folder after 2 reviews.
> > > >> > The chapters CG-7015-KeyboardShortcuts and CG7016-ErrorCodes are
> now on
> > > >> the
> > > >> > Draft folder ready for a second review.
> > > >> >
> > > >> >
> > > >> > I would like to raise a few questions about the Calc Guide
> publishing:
> > > >> >
> > > >> > i. How are we on the Toolbar appendix? Are they already mandatory
> for
> > > >> the
> > > >> > guides in this 7.0?
> > > >> > ii. Considering Steve's fine job in the previous version, and
> that we
> > > >> are
> > > >> > closer to a LO 7.1 release, I'm thinking in start publishing the
> > > >> chapters
> > > >> > with at least one review. In this case, we can start working on
> the 7.1
> > > >> > Calc Guide immediately. If anyone could comment on this matter
> would be
> > > >> > great!
> > > >> >
> > > >> > Best regards,
> > > >> > Felipe Viggiano
> > > >> >
> > > >> >
> > > >> > Em qui., 29 de out. de 2020 às 19:18, Olivier Hallot <
> > > >> > [email protected]> escreveu:
> > > >> >
> > > >> >> Hello Team
> > > >> >>
> > > >> >> I added the file CG70-CalcGuide-Master-OH.odm in the Feedback
> folder
> > > >> for
> > > >> >> further work.
> > > >> >>
> > > >> >> * The covers were updated tp 7.0
> > > >> >> * new 7.0 template applied to master document.
> > > >> >>
> > > >> >> On opening the file, LO will ask to update the links. As master
> > > >> >> document, the links must be reworked at publication time. I'll
> refrain
> > > >> >> to update fields, ToCs, Indexes and links until all chapters are
> in
> > > >> >> published folder.
> > > >> >>
> > > >> >> Cheers
> > > >> >> --
> > > >> >> Olivier Hallot
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