Hey all,

The docs are sometimes written with the passive voice when IMO they would 
be easier to read in the active voice.

An example from the Agent docs:
https://github.com/elixir-lang/elixir/compare/master...hassanshaikley:agent-docs-imo?expand=1

Relevant piece on when to use the Active vs Passive voice in documentation 
by Daphne Watson: 
https://medium.com/@DaphneWatson/technical-writing-active-vs-passive-voice-485dfaa4e498
 

The definitions of the active and the passive voice from: 
https://www.reddit.com/r/explainlikeimfive/comments/rpr2q/eli5_active_voice_vs_passive_voice/c47n837?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x

In the active voice, the subject of the sentence is the thing that's doing 
> the action (the student, in your case). In passive voice, the subject is 
> the recipient of the action (the book). As for the difference, well, read 
> them - don't they sound different? As you picture what's happening, doesn't 
> your mind visualize it differently?


Examples from:
https://writing.wisc.edu/handbook/style/ccs_activevoice/

Passive: It was earlier demonstrated that heart attacks can be caused by 
> high stress.
> Active: Researchers earlier showed that high stress can cause heart 
> attacks.


I would love to hear what y'all think!

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