Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-emu-aka-pfs-11: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-emu-aka-pfs/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi, Thanks for this document, just one relatively minor suggestion. I suggest dropping the first paragraph of the abstract and just keep the second. The first paragraph seems to be about justifying why this document exists which I think is much better placed in the introduction, or a background subsection of the introduction. This shortens the abstract to just describing what the document is. Regards, Rob _______________________________________________ Emu mailing list Emu@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/emu
