Hi Christian,
Wow, thanks a lot for the detailed feedback! I've merged most of your
changes with the manuscript on the wiki now.
On Sun, Aug 17, 2014 at 11:15 , Christian Hergert
<[email protected]> wrote:
However, I generally follow the sentences should have 15 words or less
guideline. Possibly worth breaking those each into their own sentence.
>> In most cases I expect commas in the manuscript to have a more
pronounced pause than they normally would in a conversation, hence why
I use them a lot. But I agree.
I'm okay with the Builder line I guess. I don't want to seem like I'm
hijacking 3.14 release notes for something that, while under the GNOME
umbrella, is a selfish effort of my own desires :-)
Well, I thought it would supplement well to our message of wanting to
focus on the developer experience in GNOME. Plus it was an interesting
way to promote your fundraiser. I would be interested in knowing how
the rest of engagement feels about this, though?
- GNOME 3.14 has gained Clipboard support on Wayland and we're pushing
to have good tablet, keyboard and touch support through libinput.
+ GNOME 3.14 has gained Clipboard support on Wayland. We're advancing
libinput to improve the experience on keyboards, tablets, and touch.
^ Not sure on this one, is someone from GNOME contributing to libinput
development?
hmm, I actually am not sure. But anyone knows of a different area of
Wayland we've made an effort within, this cycle, feel free to suggest
that as a replacement.
Another thought that came to my mind. Do we want to encourage donation
/ becoming a friend of GNOME in the end of the video? Is this something
we do in the release notes? Or should we keep that out?
-bastianilso
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