Hi Elham,

*You wrote :*

Elementary schools boost *children* knowledge greatly. It is the stage where
they are exposed to different materials which* founds* their future
interests.

In my opinion, none of them is a waste of time and students must learn a
mixture of *those* subjects.

Instead, each one contributes to development of one aspect of their minds
and children in primary schools *had better* to be offered at least one unit
of them compulsorily.

*Corrected :*

Elementary schools boost *children**'s* knowledge greatly. It is the stage
where they are exposed to different materials which* **help them find* their
future interests.

In my opinion, none of them is a waste of time and students must learn a
mixture of *these* subjects.

Instead, each one contributes to development of one aspect of their minds
and it is better to offer at least one unit of them compulsorily.

*
regards
briana*

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