Beautiful images. No windows of Chartres could be so beautiful and fragment the 
light in such a way as the oak leaves in November as described in your poem.


In the last few stanzas, does the artist succeed in raising himself  from the 
mud or rather become the poet/artist of the very mud and earth he is relegated 
to? I like that imagery a lot. An artist can aspire to rise above earth (or a 
tree climber for that matter), but he/she is ultimatley bound to the earth in 
all its guises.


I think we need an ENTS book of poetry. I wrote lyrics for a folk song, so 
maybe that counts?


Thanks so much,


Jenny



-----Original Message-----
From: thomas howard <[email protected]>
To: [email protected]
Sent: Mon, Dec 21, 2009 9:44 am
Subject: [ENTS] Re: Winter Tree Poem


ENTS,


I have written some poems that are somewhat related to trees in winter. I'm 
sending you one - this poem is written in the persona of the main character of 
2 science fiction novels I'm writing about an artist born in Chartres, France - 
Chartres is a place I long to visit, a place I've studied a lot over many years 
:



November Light
 
 
The lightthrough the cathedral windows of Chartres –
The light thatstreams down through the clerestory of oak crowns in 
Our natural cathedral–
The stainedglass of Chartres that strains the light of celestial spaces
The golden,russet leaves of ancient oaks that strain the light 
Into cathedralstrands like stained glass
 
All are the samelight – leaves of oaks, windows of Chartres glow with
The same innerlight of gray November, the inner soul, light 
Inwardlydirected,
Heaven in arusset oak leaf drifting down from the old growth canopy
 
My earliestchildhood – the November sky of Chartres, later the November
Sky of the oakgrove – the light is the same 
 
What am I butthe mud of Earth?
The seed of lifein November when Earth withers away?
 
Light – gray,inner, of fallen leaves, of stone and wood
Cathedral spires– medieval man, ancient trees – 
Light that isold and new, where heaven and Earth meet in
November rain,sleet, leaves falling past saints and heroes –
Etched instained glass –
Past the Grecianoak columns holding up the forest cathedral
Older than man
 
I must embodyall this to be a true poet, true artist
But the mud and coldforce me down
 
Yet I become thecelestial song of the withering 
NovemberEarth.  
 
 
 
 Tom Howard
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
                      

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