On 25 Dec 2014 at 7:12, brucedp5 via EV wrote:

> "you can ultimately reside a significant-car life-style without the
> need of living at the pump." 

I suppose I'll look a tad pedantic here, but I hate to see Tesla trip over 
themselves.  And if I were the PR guy who'd written that awkward, lumpy 
copy, I sure wouldn't admit to it.

Tesla is selling EVs to educated people.  Such folk can't look at the car 
with their eyes rolled!  Tesla needs some writers who know how to write in 
plain English.

> "That's a great point," stated Musk. "We're surely paying additional
> focus to the requires of women in the Model X, and I feel you happen to
> be appropriate, we probably got a small also guy-centric on the S. So,
> we're hoping to right that with the X."  

This is even worse gibberish, and clueless to boot.  

Reporters will do this to you - quote you verbatim when you step in it.  If 
Elon is really trying to sell more Teslas of ANY model to women, he'll do 
better by just keeping his mouth shut and letting the ad agency handle it.

David Roden - Akron, Ohio, USA
EVDL Administrator

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