Just started reading this last night, so I'm sure most of this has been said...
There are A LOT of mistakes in this story, and I do mean a LOT. Most glaring is the misspelling of "Makoto" as "Matoko", and the line in the first chapter about the crossover characters not being able to understand "a voice speaking in Japanese" that was saying "Moon Crisis Make-Up"--which is, of course, *in English to begin with*. Admittedly, it's hard to understand thickly-accented Engrish, but still. Anyway, I'll have more comments on future chapters as I find time to read them. ================================ "Sheik Protein? He's a mean ol' ass, Cid." ~~*~~ The Eternal Lost Lurker www.lurkerdrome.com --- .-------Anime/Manga Fanfiction Mailing List--------. | Administrators - [EMAIL PROTECTED] | | Unsubscribing - [EMAIL PROTECTED] | | Put 'unsubscribe' in the subject | `------------ FAQ URL coming soon.... -------------'