"All" is superfluous; I would remove it. I would also remove "before proceeding further"; it is assumed that the user will perform this step before proceeding to the next one.
Revised sentence: Remove the covers from the supervisor and nodes. As to whether the revision is "better," minimalists would say that content is easier to read and understand when you streamline a sentence. Cheryl On Thu, Jul 16, 2020 at 12:56 PM Tom Beiswenger < [email protected]> wrote: > I prefer "A". "Further," though, is redundant. If you are proceeding, it > can be presumed that you are going further. > > -----Original Message----- > From: Framers <framers-bounces+tom.beiswenger= > [email protected]> On Behalf Of Doug > Sent: Thursday, July 16, 2020 12:52 PM > To: An email list for people using Adobe FrameMaker software. < > [email protected]> > Subject: [EXTERNAL] [Framers] Grammar question > > Which of the two sentences is better? Is there a "better", or is it just > a matter of personal preference? > > A. Remove all the covers from the supervisor and nodes before proceeding > further. > > B. Remove the covers from the supervisor and all nodes before proceeding > further. > > Thanks! > _______________________________________________ > > This message is from the Framers mailing list > > Send messages to [email protected] Visit the list's homepage > at > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__www.frameusers.com&d=DwICAg&c=euGZstcaTDllvimEN8b7jXrwqOf-v5A_CdpgnVfiiMM&r=zzmJd9V-AOY-pLCA-v8cPy_mRSvZCZwNZBdUabWmOfQ&m=E06cd_ebvLhhUxgxFUFz6qKr8KVBVogWB8bfyDhXdwQ&s=SiuGPFsFOQJOLDE_SJ-Qnc-CJrk0LjDnyKChbn3syGs&e= > Archives located at > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__www.mail-2Darchive.com_framers-2540lists.frameusers.com_&d=DwICAg&c=euGZstcaTDllvimEN8b7jXrwqOf-v5A_CdpgnVfiiMM&r=zzmJd9V-AOY-pLCA-v8cPy_mRSvZCZwNZBdUabWmOfQ&m=E06cd_ebvLhhUxgxFUFz6qKr8KVBVogWB8bfyDhXdwQ&s=Fn18__Y4754odcMIsHc9IEwEbvtmEov4ICWLFVXXwGw&e= > Subscribe and unsubscribe at > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__lists.frameusers.com_listinfo.cgi_framers-2Dframeusers.com&d=DwICAg&c=euGZstcaTDllvimEN8b7jXrwqOf-v5A_CdpgnVfiiMM&r=zzmJd9V-AOY-pLCA-v8cPy_mRSvZCZwNZBdUabWmOfQ&m=E06cd_ebvLhhUxgxFUFz6qKr8KVBVogWB8bfyDhXdwQ&s=KBxYkF0KySkbYCmr37ehZehOkyMxnt3R1azJewRra28&e= > Send administrative questions to [email protected] > _______________________________________________ > > This message is from the Framers mailing list > > Send messages to [email protected] > Visit the list's homepage at http://www.frameusers.com > Archives located at > http://www.mail-archive.com/framers%40lists.frameusers.com/ > Subscribe and unsubscribe at > http://lists.frameusers.com/listinfo.cgi/framers-frameusers.com > Send administrative questions to [email protected] > _______________________________________________ This message is from the Framers mailing list Send messages to [email protected] Visit the list's homepage at http://www.frameusers.com Archives located at http://www.mail-archive.com/framers%40lists.frameusers.com/ Subscribe and unsubscribe at http://lists.frameusers.com/listinfo.cgi/framers-frameusers.com Send administrative questions to [email protected]
