On Tue, 21 Jun 2016 06:01:52 +1000 Ben M <puzzleduck+softwarefree...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi all, > > I've mashed up all our ideas and suggestions and have something rather > presentable here: https://etherpad.wikimedia.org/p/fsm-City-of-Casey > > Please don't leave comments as this is what we will be sending, but do make > any improvements that you can see or corrections you can make. I'll take a > "late lunch" and try and send this about 3~4pm ... until then improve away > (checking that all the links work and point to the desired pages is > something easy to do and yet to be done, also making the language > consistent like always using FOSS or Free an Open Source Software would be > neat) > > Thanks to everyone who chipped in research, suggested alternatives, > examples and words in general :D That looks great, thanks for putting it all together. I reckon that it's ready to send off. Oh, and I just got a response from Council about what "Business process software purchases" is. Unfortunately, it doesn't make any sense: Casey will be undertaking market testing to procure a business process management software tool to support the development of more efficient and effective processes aimed at delivering a better customer experience and increasing productivity. This will support the Lean business improvement methodology that is being introduced to the organisation.
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