Well, technically a haiku is 17 syllables, arranged 5-7-5, no?? I’m thinking 
more of Robert Frost

 

In any case I want to change the last line. 

 

Above my house, an unkindness of ravens flew.
And distinguished from the many was one
whose feathers shone white, almost translucent
against the sky in the bright sunlight.
What fine sports do black ravens make!



Isn’t it about time for the Annual Poetry Contest?

 

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No, it’s a haiku.

On 4 Feb 2021, at 15:23, jon zingale wrote:

Above my house, an unkindness of ravens flew.
And distinguished from the many was one
whose feathers shone white, almost translucent
against the sky in the bright sunlight.
Is this a common genetic variant?



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